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Winter 2006, vol 4 no 4

RENKU

Kasen : Springtime in Edo

       

Springtime in Edo,
Not a day passes without
A temple bell sold.

Kikaku    

Effervescent haze reaching
To the dark side of the moon.

Eiko    

From deepest sleep
I waken to the sound
Of uncle's plough.

Norman    

A tender omelette just cooked
Fills the kitchen with fragrance.

Shizuka    

On the open sea,
A ship speeds, all her sails
Bellied with the wind.

Akiko    

Being a traveller on the road,
I hung my white shirt to dry.

Haku    

* * * *

 
     

This way and that way
A single photon flips
Through quantum states.

John    

The party raw and raucous,
Turns philosophical.

Dick    

Caring for each other
Bare willows and
A barbarian king.

Tito    

Tenderly, with a chicken bone
He dubs her winter queen.

Kirsty    

Love, for my next trick
I will turn this salad bowl
Into a blackbird.

Dick    

The autumn flower-field spins,
The entire world turning round.

Shizuka    

The moon at her full
Bends a branch of a pine tree
By her own sheer weight.

Sosui    

Brightly eyed and sleek of flank
Our pigs root in the beech mast.

John    

A great comedy boom,
Just a comic squeaking
On all the networks.

Haku    

Even today, Auschwitz
Frozen harder than ice.

Akiko    

On a granite gravestone
The faintest scattering
Of cherry petals.

Kirsty    

Hallelujah, Hallelujah
Christ the King is risen.

John    

* * * *

 
     

Gleams of ayu fish
Jumping at the waterfall,
Sharp as a dagger.

Sosui    

Drawing a brush from its case,
Kikaku writes on the spot.

Shizuka    

In the blue dusk
Rain clouds suddenly lifting,
Kilimanjaro.

Eiko    

She cheers up by stitching
Corn tassels to her hat.

Kirsty    

The farmer's trailer
Is stuffed with scarecrows,
One head has rolled.

Tito    

Breathless, I watch a snake
Slither into its dark hole.

Eiko    

The moon out of eclipse,
From the crowd on the hill
A loud ovation.

Tito    

Hungry for those heights
He takes the slope step by step.

Norman    

My old mentor dead
I pray for his soul's repose
Crouched on the floor.

Haku    

A name engraved on a beach
One summer day long ago.

Sosui    

The heather-lined road
To Scarborough fair,
The purple of her lips.

John    

Childish curls of chimney smoke
From the drawing of a house.

Kirsty    

* * * *

 
     

The metrical beat
Of pounding rice into cakes,
Tan ton tan ton ton.

Akiko    

Interviewed after a win
The champion wrestler blushes.

Eiko    

Slowly warming
The bank of the river
Where we take our rest.

Dick    

Since fifteen he has enjoyed
Sake, cheerful as spring days.

Haku    

Paper lanterns sway
Beneath the blossoms, linking
All ages and worlds.

Akiko    

A butterfly hair grip
Clasped in my daughter's hand.

John    
     

A Kasen to commemorate the 300th anniversary of Kikaku's death
Composed: 16 July 2005 to 17 February 2006

Arbitrators: Nobuyuki Yuasa, Eiko Yachimoto, John Carley, Kirsty Karkow

Participants:
Nobuyuki Yuasa (Sosui) - Japan - sabaki
Haku Asanuma (Haku) - Japan
Akiko Sakaguchi (Akiko) - Japan
Eiko Yachimoto (Eiko) - Japan
Shizuka Yamamoto (Shizuka) - Japan
John Carley (John) - Great Britain
Norman Darlington (Norman) - Ireland
Stephen Gill (Tito) - Japan
Kirsty Karkow (Kirsty) - USA
Dick Pettit (Dick) - Denmark

 

Relevant elsewhere in Simply Haiku:
Springtime in Edo (Japanese version)
Contrast and Integration: A reflection on the composition of Springtime in Edo, by John Carley
Audio file of the poem's English text, read by your editor


 

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