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Summer 2009, vol 7 no 2
 

RENKU
 

Beneath Thin Snow: Triparshva

Side 1  
beneath thin snow
how brightly coloured the leaves
on this mountain path
Shohaku (tr. Darlington)
 
a halo of morning frost
on the old bull
CM
 
a pair of thrushes
ruffling their feathers
while I shave
CSJ
 
"I want some water"
his wife calls from upstairs
GE
 
pale and feeble
in the heat haze
daytime moon
AW
 
a mound of pearly silks
tumbles from the basket
SS
 
Side 2
this time
it's Saké then Heart of Fire
closely followed by Irish Cream...
KE
 
 
along the quay, vendors
hawking their wares
CM
 
the pucker
of her nipples in the cool
sea breeze 
KE
 
at the Valentine's dance
wheelchairs roll to the beat
GE
 
rattling through
the station where we parted
so many years ago
AW
 
all our tomorrows blighted
by peak everything
KE
 
workhouse walls
still hold the crumbling echo
of mothers' cries
ND
 
katydids' songs of praise
at Amma's pink ashram
KE
 
a rose window
in the vast indigo sky
the moon
SS
 
one scarecrow working
a field of broken pumpkins
CM
 
Side 3
dominoes topple
hardly a murmur
from the crowd
GE
 
vanilla and mint ice-creams
"that's mine! that's mine!"
SS
 
how would it be
if every country's flag
flew white?
ND
 
threaded with ribbons
of sound this catcall night
KE
 
on bare boughs
tiny starlet blossom
gaze heavenward
MW
 
meltwater - he speaks
of harnessing the sun
AW
  

Participants:
 
Carole MacRury (USA)
Colin Stewart Jones (Scotland)
Gerald England (England)
Alison Williams (England)
Susan Shand (England)
Kathy Earsman (Australia)
Norman Darlington (Ireland)
Mary White (Ireland)

Composed in the Facebook Renku Group during December 2008 and January 2009. Sabakis, Norman Darlington & Moira Richards.

Related articles in this issue of Simply Haiku:Beneath Thin Snow: Notes by Carole MacRury, Alison Williams, Susan Shand, Kathy Earsman, Norman Darlington, Mary White, Gerald England.


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